s per basic screenplay coverage, but as it applies to the specific needs of a TV pilot – act breaks, plot, story, characters.
ive pages of in-depth screenplay analysis of concept, story, structure, characterization, and dialogue. Including a character breakdown, discussion of story strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for improvement of your screenplay. Allows you to assess in detail the direction of your script and how it's working.
etailed line-by-line screenplay analysis of story, structure, characterization, conflict, prose and dialogue. Including useful story suggestions to improve all elements of your screenplay. Comments also cover the concept and how to exploit it to its full potential. Special consideration is given to the 'hook,' discussing its effectiveness and how to develop and improve it. This is deep analysis that is an essential tool in your arsenal when developing an early draft or reworking deep issues in your script.